While flowing down with the mysterious essence,
The rivers and streams release what can be called your sense
All around the steps of the valleys shines the sun of your beauty,
Pointing the inner and outer parts of what is missing in me
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this is a very deep and strong write, written with passion. a 10 my friend
A lovely poem! Nice flow of words. An enjoyable read, wonderful tribute as well; D
This is a wonderfully written love poem. I like how you take elements of nature and blend them very nicely into this ode to you loved one.Very nicely done. Keep it up.
Your eyes are the palace of freedom in my soul, Your face is the expression of future in my heart, these are exceptionally beautiful poetic lines within a wonderfully written love poem of dedication