Tuesday, August 9, 2016
Head Games, Heart Pains Comments
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You say you were looking for love
I answered your call
You acted like this could be something
But it was nothing at all
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Darkbeauty's Revivedangel (kitty3 ;) Rewr)
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7/26/2025 12:57:20 PM # 1.0.0
Prosaic verse requires special talent..When I was 19 I'm not sure I could spell prosaic, much less architect the above work...Aside from a bit of structural improvements that will enable your linage to be a bit tighter, crisper and flow more mellifluously...I like it, and you ostensibly possess the potentials needed to maximize what you already have naturally in writing quality Prose...Good Luck, young lady!