Saturday, August 20, 2016

Head Fcuk Comments

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Head Fcuk

A dark mind with negative thoughts,
can still put on a spectacular show,
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Annette Aitken
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 October 2016

Negative thoughts! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bill Cantrell 27 August 2016

Annette, this poem is much deeper than the picture you painted by words, the mind.....yes the mind, who can ever really see what is there...what should be there or what was there, and you were wise not to curse to cheapen your message for it certainly would have done an injustice to the point you made in pleading your case, the physical and mental....is there a difference when it comes to pain? You really penned a wonderful poem.

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Tom Billsborough 22 August 2016

A stunning poem, Annette. One of your best. The last few lines are particularly good and the Volcanic images highly imaginative. Put it in my favourites' list

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Annette Aitken 23 August 2016

Thank you Tom that is very kind of you to say.......

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