Head Fcuk
A dark mind with negative thoughts,
can still put on a spectacular show,
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Annette, this poem is much deeper than the picture you painted by words, the mind.....yes the mind, who can ever really see what is there...what should be there or what was there, and you were wise not to curse to cheapen your message for it certainly would have done an injustice to the point you made in pleading your case, the physical and mental....is there a difference when it comes to pain? You really penned a wonderful poem.
A stunning poem, Annette. One of your best. The last few lines are particularly good and the Volcanic images highly imaginative. Put it in my favourites' list
Negative thoughts! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.