Friday, September 21, 2012

Head And Shoulder Comments

Rating: 5.0

My throbbing head!
Your strong shoulder,
My safe bed.
Peace, peace, peace showers
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Poornima Raman
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Ejay 1806 12 April 2016

The music it created while reading was pleasant. Nice poem. Comment on my poems as well.

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Cm Ravi 06 January 2014

Lovely thoughts, nice romantic vision,

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Ramesh Rai 05 October 2012

it is nice that u r my fb frnd also. very nice, soft and beautiful

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Hans Vr 23 September 2012

Beautiful poem. It moves the reader.

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Payal Parande 22 September 2012

so beautiful and romantic...a splendid write thank you for sharing love payal

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 September 2012

Lovely romantic poem i enjoyd readin.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 21 September 2012

Great romance is mirrored in your lovely write.Keep writing.Best wishes.

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Indranil Bhaduri 21 September 2012

deep thoughtrs, speaking of romance, belongingness and love..Great piece.

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