Tuesday, July 22, 2008

He Will Not Forsake You (Full Version) Comments

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If you only believe
To give all to Him,
Whatever trials come to you
And you know you cannot handle it,
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Stanley Jun
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Francisco R. Albano 29 July 2008

Good. But edit and remove nasty grammatical errors. E.g. All the trials ARE easy. Let Jesus LIVE in your heart. etc.

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May Namoc 28 July 2008

a powerful peice, sets in the faith of god. good write!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 July 2008

The last stanza sums it up all. Well written. Faith is God! ! sathya narayana

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Maria Isabel Oropeza 23 July 2008

This poem is so true. Thank you for writing this. I needed it and I have favorited this poem. I expect to see more of your poetry in the future! Good luck! Elizabeth

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