Wednesday, April 18, 2012

He Will Never Dream Of Teddy Bears Comments

Rating: 4.0

As alone, as he will ever be
in his blanket fast asleep,
a baby dreams of the only face
that he will never see.
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Saadat Tahir 24 August 2012

eeeeks....so strong...OMG it catches you unawares in the solar plexus...makes you double over with pain and hurt...HURT big time. the depth of the pits that swirl a a gooey morass.... societal issues.... written with numbing feelings....high on emotive score nice poem cant bring myself to say i liked it.....too painful....

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