He Will Come Home Tonight Comments
She woke up gleefully at dawn,
With barely a half night's sleep done,
As her husband skyped her last night,
To tell her he would come home tonight.
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wow.. the flow of this poem is really nice! ! & true your poem says! ! lovely...
@ Valsa George, Thank you very much for your broadness in appreciating me and my poem so open heartedly. I am highly elated to receive that kind of a compliment from a woman of my age. Belated thanks for the new year greetings.
@ Lyn Paul, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your appreciative comment there, which inspire me very much. Much obliged.
Thank you so much for reading the poem and leaving nice words of appreciation here, @ Tanya Guleria.
fantastic loved it and so moving great use of imagery and symbolism. I rated it a 10. I was actually wishing it was me the person was coming home to lol. thank you.
Ha ha ha, may your wish too come true! Thanks for the humor and the generous appreciation and rating, @Crystal Conrick-knight
Khairul such a beautiful poem.Reading it you can feel how excited she is preparing the food and also herself for his homecoming.Well done
Thank you so much, @Noreen Carden, for reading my poem and leaving a thoughtful comment here. Much inspired and obliged! I've just read your beautiful poem - 'Shade And Light' and left a comment there.
@ Beauteous Victory Thanks for reading the poem and leaving your compliments. Your words of praise always inspire me to try and write a good poem.
This is just lovely, hope there are more man in this world who know this.
Oh thank you so much, @Lasoaphia Quxazs, for your lovely appreciation! The lines of the poem came from imaginations only!
Thank you @Linda Gentle, aka Ivana Radan Jamnicki for your kind appreciation and generous rating of the poem. Much inspired!
haha, very true very nice you know very well what a woman would do to please a husband and you know so intently what and how she feels when her man comes. 11 points (smiles)
Thanks for your eleven points, Nadia! :) The poem is a figment of imagination, wearing shoes of the other half!
The excitement of a woman anticipating her man's home coming after a temporary separation is beautifully penned in rhyming verse! Khairul, you know in depth a woman's heart! Great write! ! Wish you a very happy New Year!
@ Gary H, Thank you. Skill will develop with time. So keep writing, reading and sharing your thoughts.
@ Geetha Jayakumar, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your thoughts here. I am inspired.
Yes lovely write, a great coverage on homecoming from WAR which is so uncalled for
This is truly amazing, you got so much skills. This helps me want to get good as well!
Beautiful poem on woman, who gets ready to welcome her dear husband. Beautiful lines...A woman always loves to give her best, To her man she loves in right earnest. Loved reading it.
@ Gajanan Mishra. Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts.
loves to give her best, I salute women for her good quality. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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What woman hasn't been busied, beautifying herself, for her heart's affection? Still, whatever the chosen clothing, perfume, jewelry...it is the shine of her soul that is clearly remembered. This reads like a modern day fairy tale...happy endings, once in an embrace, face to face. Wow!
'it is the shine of her soul that is clearly remembered. This reads like a modern day fairy tale...happy endings, once in an embrace, face to face' - Thanks for your attentive reading and the kind comment, @Susan Lacovara. Much obliged!