Saturday, March 24, 2012

He, Who Must Not Be Named Comments

Rating: 3.5

Staring into the emptiness
deafened by the silence
just looking and not thinking
seems like a hole, a void
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COMMENTS
Rishit Desai 03 April 2012

A very well written poem. Good work Indeed.

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Ency Bearis 02 April 2012

Good poem well written poetically

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Unwritten Soul 02 April 2012

Even if you call He it was named, the poetry you done here done in very well, a lot of mind, streets and road you tell...bout where to go as you dont want to lost from the real state of mind... write more and you have lot to share, i believe it :) ! thanks for inviting and sorry for late respond: P! _Unwritten SOul

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Ernest Makuakua 01 April 2012

Great poem! well maybe i am he who is not to be named. Lol. i like it

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Valerie Dohren 31 March 2012

An excellent poem with great meaning. Very well written.

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Tanja Bulovic 31 March 2012

You are more powerful than you think... Very well written.

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Sonali Gupta 31 March 2012

nice, very well written! ! keep doing justice to your other poems as you did to this one :)

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Ishita Mehta 30 March 2012

wow you have actually surpassed all my expectations. few words, very precise and has a deep impact. it compels you to read again just to infer the meaning and emotions felt by you.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 March 2012

yes, he should not be given name, all names coiled him/call by any name, His name is the name

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taanya khanna

taanya khanna

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