Tuesday, January 17, 2006

He Wept For His Father Comments

Rating: 4.7

He wept for his father
His father who implored
him to not test life, to not
seek treasures unknown
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Louise Marie DelSanto
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Gregory Gunn 29 January 2006

Dear Louise, Exemplary; especially liked the transition between the 2nd & 3rd stanzas and then the strong conclusion. Gregory

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Max Reif 27 January 2006

very powerfully sad. Well done.

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