Wednesday, February 25, 2009

He Was My Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was my soul and my life
The life is gone frustration
And now you are not my own
Every thing is gone left hurt
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Sarwar Chowdhury 15 August 2009

lovely words lovely poem! 10+

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Afzal Shauq 23 June 2009

This fet between the humans That our hearts don’t rest He was for me all the life And know he likes the dream what a sweet and charining lines of the poem..poem itself is rich and ida is not bad but interesting enough..welll done 10+++++++++

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Jihad T 01 April 2009

I JUST CAN'T BELIEVE WHY ONLY 2 PERSONS COMMENTED ON THESE NISE SOFT WORDS I LOVE IT LAILA

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