He Was Better Than Me Comments

This is life. you delivered emotions very well, and i am feeling myself in this poem

To see someone slip the chance of recovery while you were reaching out with moral aid is sad and disappointing. It is touching. God bless you for being such a kind soul to touch someone while he lived. Your deed is recorded in heaven. Your poem is inspiring and beautifully written.

Superb poem! ! ! ! Inspiring and nice tribute to unknown personalities..........10++++

you're crazy with your commas AA but i like this one.

A deeply sad tale, one that is extremely poignant and from the heart, this man can now live on in your words, and now he lives in my mind. Thank you.

I think this poem shows and abundance of love and respect...Certainly a beautiful Elegy.....

Life is certainly better than death. It is scaring but for the brave it is a resting place. A very well crafted poem.

He was a mn left all alone! Nice work.

A comparing poem composed in a beautifully manner. Best phraseology. Thoughtful and imagery. Thanks for posting.....10

A very poignant pen portrait of one who sought your moral support to surmount his worries and illness but succumbed to their pressure. The narrative brings alive the person and his life as well as your genuine concern for him. A relevant quote from the poem is a tell tale: He showed a great endurance / Will, repentance and penance But before his total recovery / Death seized him in his bravery.

A thoughtful write. You have portrayed two different characters very well. Death didn't give him enough time to recover and illness was known to all, but on other side illness remained hidden, but still have a longer life to recover. This poem reflects in many ways. I loved the way you presented it.

I like the honesty and frankness in this poem. Full mark (10) .

I feel sad for your friend. You are right about success. The person who struggles the most and succeeds in his endeavours is far more successful than the one whose life has always been a bed of roses.

A heart touching poem, very well wrote and beautiful as well...............................10

life is such a touchy poem very nicely composed Abdulrazak