He Wants To Get Lost Comments

I'm returning to this superbly crafted piece. The content is not, of course, what the reader expects from the title, rendering it all the more clever. Wonderful analogy in the second stanza. I'd love to see more of this sort of work from you. t x

It's a good poem. So I gave my 10. Wonderful metaphysical poem!

wonderful metaphor makes the wisdom aquifer fuller

This is such an interesting poem. I like how you use the analogy of the veins of how they are the map to a very specific destination, the heart perhaps? HG: -) xx

I am lost...wandering through your words...and wondering...and not wanting to find a way out. Just leave me here curled up between your woman's viens and how the poetry flows through them. I fear if you were cut...poems...poems...would flow out! love Dee Dee

...remain no more alien for him to get lost! my ten votes...

Not quite knowing what lies ahead yet knowing he wants to lose himself in love - in the one he knows he loves perhaps? Another intriging write that lets the reader absorb from this what they will...lovely flow to this too Onelia. justine.

Wooaaaa! Fab, and then some. The reader takes from this what s/he will... I have a few metaphors spinning in the grey stuff... Donall put it best, as so often. t x

very very beautiful....he wants to be lost in love that he knows well and cannot seem to get to...thats my take

A painful dilemma my friend! Excellent.

The paradox behind knowing the roads and wanting to get lost forever is interesting……too much of sensory date may take to a blank road… well expressed novel thought............

again....nice poem...like it

wonderful streets, beautiful..............thanks for sharing

Wonderfully wrought imagery that always astounds and delights me in its beauty and precision...I adore your words...their beauty and strength amaze me...and always make me want more...greedy for the next revealation...and the crisp newness of sensation. love Donall Donall

lovely poem when wrought by the imagery, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

Wonderfully sensual. One - poignant too. Ivan is right; brilliant metaphor and conciseness. Fx

You certainly have a way of paring down to the core of your subject matter with incredible metaphoric insight! Rgds, Ivan