James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Thursday, October 22, 2009

He Wandered There A Lonely Man Comments

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he wandered there a lonely man,
along each broad causeway.
and every hand that helped him up,
the other slipped away.
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James McLain
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Tai Chi Italy 23 October 2009

gut wrenching way to proceed, but we have to...I adored the title, reminded me of The Daffodil Poem...my first introduction to poetry. Great work. Wishing you a comforting weekend Smiling at you Tai

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Tsira Goge 23 October 2009

Hi, iip, - So fine, It is remarkable part, lonely have surprisingly - strong gravitation...10... Tsira

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Ramesh T A 23 October 2009

This is a good example of irony of fate in life! Well said in a brief poem!

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Patti Masterman 22 October 2009

I really love this poem; it has such fluid language and even a rhyme. Just perfect. You never cease to amaze with your increasing powers of invention.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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