Sunday, June 7, 2009

He Walks Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun burns his skin as he walks alone
Crosses the road to his empty home
The years of age scarred on his face
The family he had... left in disgrace.
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Claire Hastie
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Siddharth Singh 27 July 2009

wonderfully written, the suspense to the crime commited is never revealed. I give you a 10.

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Rob Cote 07 June 2009

POwerfull I wonder what crime he has commited

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Claire Hastie

Claire Hastie

Glasgow, Scotland
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