Tuesday, April 28, 2009

He Tried To Kick Me In The Head Comments

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If I hadn’t been watching where I was going I would be dead
For someone just tried to kick me in the head
I laughed in his face at the look of surprise
Cause he wasn’t counting on the works of his demise
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Emily Oldham 11 May 2009

vivid poem, thanks for sharing. hope you were ok and he didnt get away with it! :) Athena *** words will change the world ***

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superb detail..fine diction..well written poem..if he kicked u on the head then kick his balls.. u amazing

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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