Thursday, October 16, 2008

He Thises, She Thats; They Both Bit-Of-Bothed Comments

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When true emotions make way to pride
Differences deemed irreconcilable
Damages deduced irreparable
And third party impartial on the part of either side
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Onkgopotse Ramatiti
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Ency Bearis 22 October 2008

a great write...well narrated differences..a nice poetic piece.. Ency Bearis

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Yonela Mali 16 October 2008

wow! ! ! this is a beautiful very vivid story, you have captured my attention and mind with this piece...its brilliant

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