Tuesday, April 23, 2013

He Stretched His Wings Comments

Rating: 4.5

He stretched his wings, then drank his fill.
From the earthen saucer on the stand.
I looked at him, with a joyous thrill,
He was just four feet, from my right hand.
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Juan Olivarez
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Wahab Abdul 24 May 2013

good one.. enjoyed reading it..

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Indira Babbellapati 07 May 2013

A delight to read........

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R.j. Wynn 30 April 2013

Beautiful poem Juan, love it.

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Smoky Hoss 27 April 2013

A tender nature poem that sings to the heart, and gives cause to ponder on going outdoors!

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David Wood 25 April 2013

What a delightfully lovely poem. I really enjoyed the read. I love nature poems particularly as good as yours.

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Valerie Dohren 23 April 2013

Lovely poem Juan - birds, one of my favourite subjects.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 April 2013

nice poem read n enjoyed thank u well writ 8/10 right

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