Wednesday, December 7, 2016

He Still Peeps Comments

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I closed the door of my heart,
for a friend I was unhappy with,
I closed the windows as well,
but I could not close the cracks of its bleeding walls,
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 December 2016

True friendship exists inspite of several hindrances. A beautiful poem shared. Thanks sir.

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Rajnish Manga 08 December 2016

The spirit of friendship between true friends cannot go away even after a misunderstanding. It will find ways to redeem itself. The poet has portrayed this situation quite beautifully. Thanks. .....for a friend I was unhappy with, as long as he peeps from the cracks, I am relieved of the deadly pain.

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Khalid Saifullah 07 December 2016

A touching write, .......................................................

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Abhilasha Bhatt 07 December 2016

A friend....great gift from god....loved this amazing creation :)

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