Monday, January 19, 2009

He Stays Comments

Rating: 3.2

I also kissed
Two nordic eyes,
And held his hands
Beneath warm sheets
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Sarah Everson
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Jim French 25 February 2009

I like the way you write. great imagery, but a sinister undertone towards the end. Or did I get that wrong? Can you explain the Misery ref?

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Muhammad Ali 15 February 2009

Very sensitive. lovely poem with calm emotions showing the confidence

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 January 2009

A very deep and meaningful poem with European(Scandinavian) background......10/10.

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Colton Pellegrini 19 January 2009

thats deep check out some of mine if you want

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