Monday, November 29, 2004

He & She, Circa 1929 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here he was the summer of '29,
driving a coal truck from upstate down route
611 towards Philly. He bought
cosmos at a road side stand
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Tim Gavin
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Michael Shepherd 02 September 2005

That's more like the real you! But I find 'arriving' in the penultimate line a bit awkward grammatically.

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Lenchen Elf 30 November 2004

Fantastic slice of life and warmth. Thankyou

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Tim Gavin

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