Monday, October 1, 2012

He Sees Me This Way~ Comments

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He sees me as some sort of sex symbol
That he wants to control
His daydreams jump my bones
And love me all the way to my marrow
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 13 November 2012

Truly this had nothing to do with me in any way. I had been talking with a teacher/poet...who had suggested i read another's poems on this site. Her first name is Angie i believe...he loves her writes...and so i took a peek and saw what she wrote of...and i just wanted to prove to this great teacher/poet that i was capable of writing in a similar fashion, even though, it is not me, not my inner self either, believe me, i know...so i looked again at her work and thought and thought...this was not easy, and no it did not come from deep down...so in this case, i, respectfully disagree. When i wrote about my reasons, that was the truth...this DID NOT come from my inner being. Whether you choose to believe that or not, is your right. i know the truth. It WAS NOT abot me, nor did it have anything to do with me in any way!

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Whisperkwane Lamb 13 November 2012

I understand you said this has nothing to do with you or anyone you know...but I would think as you the woman who might have read or seem a vision...in a place...has been touched deep, deep within your inner self..and as you began to write those word from within your inner self came running to the front to be heard so you let them...and I believe you know, you let them loose..lol...good write...I enjoy the heat...and Sweat drenched sheets

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Theodora (Theo) Onken

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