He Said, She Said Comments

This is haunting, and it is beautiful. It has a ring of truth to it, which causes the reader to empathize with the poet. Extremely well done, whether fictional or not.

I personally do not see any advice in his case. Poor she had been a terrible victim of a huge hypocrisy. More I read it, more I feel sympathetic for her. Full marks to the poem.

Advices given without bothering to understand a girl's troubles thereby creating a confused and bewildered lass.good write.Thanks 75813

we are nothing, really nothing..

very interesting poem...parents always have good intentions towards their kids; but they are also humans and may not always be right....Thanks for sharing

The wordy tussle between make and female about personal matters are well exposed in this poem meant only for the couple to be careful about their way of living!

It seems too drawn out, and yet well worth another read. The standard of member poems have been raised.

So much counseling from a series of people in our life will more often than not break the receiver than make him. The personality that would emerge is what you have mentioned here: And guilt burned like acid through the core of my being. ......And I became numb to myself and the world around me after all.

What a wonderfully expressed poem! Powerful. Thanks for sharing.

A painful message of Man's inhumanity to Man.......even within one's own family!

Beautiful, simply beautiful

cool poems you rock i loved it so as my boyfriend

It gives you the chill. because i actually feel with the little girl her pain and bottled up emotions. emotions are beautifully brought out. i love it

I notice there is no previous comment so I'm the first. Well, here goes. This is a prose revelation of life not uncommon. The story might be written by millions. But this story was writen by only one. If its true, its a sign of success. If its not, its a sign of brilliance in her writing. Either way, its worth reading and remembering. GW62