He Said 'Hi' Comments

Now that's what I call a brilliant poem.Would that your dream would come true. Any sequel to that encounter? It's such an honest and simple declaration of being attracted to someone and getting even a morsel of recognition in return!

I love this ditty! It captures the moment so well... even with blushed cheeks, and coy and wistful insight. We all have moments like this, where we think wow and get caught off guard even with the simplest of smiles. Don't you worry I am sure he thinks you're lovely too! A moment of your life you have snapshotted and placed upon the sceen, you are an emotional writer and can transgress the feeling to others with your poetic talent. Very good indeed. Dale :)

I like the captured feel of nervous anticipation, and the silly hope and expectation that place on a meeting with that person we admire. We can't help it, it just consumes us.