The celebration ended
as we dragged ourselves to bed.
My heart is brimming over
with the words that he just said.
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Oh for that as one feeling. I think couples save each other, especially ones that love each other as you and your partner obviously do. Sweet little write Mary. 10 from smiling, gonna get there again, if it kills me! Smiling Tai
Mary, This one brought tears to my eyes. Very touching. Simply lovely. A 10 from me. Shannon
Nice CJ, lovely poem sweet good like you, , , , have a great day dave xxx
A man gets lucky sometimes and finds the woman that can make the world make sense! !
This is a beautiful piece Mary and has the pace (and meter - ha, ha) that suits the sentiment and words so well. You just will not accept compliments though, will you? Laffin'.
Another example of 'behind every good man is a better woman' Rusty
You'll have my tears flowing Mary, if you're not careful, Another very moving piece from you. Well done. Love Ernestine XXX
Such warmth and honesty, written by someone with an extremely big heart. It is so good for me to read your work at the moment. You seem inspired. Thank you. Kindest Regards Slim. x.
Deep sentiment made yet more powerful by the 'believability' of the characters portrayed. Every verse offers a heartwarming and touching picture of some kind. Delightful write, Mary.
Wonderful and giving! Insightful and romantic as well! I like this poem. I can relate. LSP
So sweet, Mary...You are both the lucky ones. Nicely done.
I very much like the way you write, Mary; the feeling, the meter, and the rhyme. Ans the stories you tell. I'm glad to be back with Poem Hunter. Frank Gardner