Monday, January 2, 2006

He Said He Thought I Saved Him Comments

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The celebration ended
as we dragged ourselves to bed.
My heart is brimming over
with the words that he just said.
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Frank V. Gardner 08 November 2009

I very much like the way you write, Mary; the feeling, the meter, and the rhyme. Ans the stories you tell. I'm glad to be back with Poem Hunter. Frank Gardner

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***** ********* 05 January 2006

Oh for that as one feeling. I think couples save each other, especially ones that love each other as you and your partner obviously do. Sweet little write Mary. 10 from smiling, gonna get there again, if it kills me! Smiling Tai

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Shannon Chapel 03 January 2006

Mary, This one brought tears to my eyes. Very touching. Simply lovely. A 10 from me. Shannon

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Linda Hepner 03 January 2006

What a wonderful confession of mutual love!

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David Darbyshire 03 January 2006

Nice CJ, lovely poem sweet good like you, , , , have a great day dave xxx

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Uriah Hamilton 02 January 2006

A man gets lucky sometimes and finds the woman that can make the world make sense! !

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Joseph Daly 02 January 2006

This is a beautiful piece Mary and has the pace (and meter - ha, ha) that suits the sentiment and words so well. You just will not accept compliments though, will you? Laffin'.

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Rusty Daily 02 January 2006

Another example of 'behind every good man is a better woman' Rusty

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Ernestine Northover 02 January 2006

You'll have my tears flowing Mary, if you're not careful, Another very moving piece from you. Well done. Love Ernestine XXX

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Slimboydim . 02 January 2006

Such warmth and honesty, written by someone with an extremely big heart. It is so good for me to read your work at the moment. You seem inspired. Thank you. Kindest Regards Slim. x.

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Chuck Audette 02 January 2006

I 'm a big fan of this one. Very romantic. -chuck

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Gina Onyemaechi 02 January 2006

Deep sentiment made yet more powerful by the 'believability' of the characters portrayed. Every verse offers a heartwarming and touching picture of some kind. Delightful write, Mary.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 02 January 2006

Wonderful and giving! Insightful and romantic as well! I like this poem. I can relate. LSP

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Moya Levy 02 January 2006

Thats really nice Mary, very humble. Moyax

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So sweet, Mary...You are both the lucky ones. Nicely done.

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