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He said
in a moment of retrospect,
with murky eyes
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Zoe, that's probably one of my all time favourite female names, you are, for one so young, an astonishingly good writer. What can I say about this poem but excellent. If you were my daughter, or my grand-daughter, I'd be encouraging you to take up writing as a full-time occupation. You are extremely talented. Best of writing luck young lady, Jerry
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7/30/2025 6:04:03 PM # 1.0.0
I agree with jerry completely. You write from somewher real and it shows. Excelent stuff!