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A beautiful picture of love love lost in the mind real yet not not devotion yet devotion lost in confusion confusion only discovered when it's over and done

Holy cow this is still so amazing from the last time I read it! I think I liked it even better than in class :) you better get the rest of your poems on though... Lol

Melissa, this is so beautiful. You have an uncanny ability for flow that I'm am envious of. You most definately have a gift...

WOWIE! ! ! This is extraordinarily deep! ! I LOVE IT!

WOWZA! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This poem is super deep and the ending really hits you hard! It's very interesting. :)

1. wow 2. this is so vivid and amzing 3. i love it 4. this is due tomorrow or friday.. 5. good luck with the rest. (like u need it though) ha ha :) 6. i really enjoy reading ur stuff cuz they're so real and deep. 7. cant wait to read more! ! !