Sunday, July 21, 2013

He's Not Me Comments

Rating: 3.5

He's vanilla,
I'm real.
He's toast,
I'm a meal.
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Bri Edwards 18 September 2013

i laughed lightly at the last two lines, but not until the second reading. cool! but be careful! ! ! i wonder if this is just a fantasy or a real-for-you story. again some nice rhymes. well done though i was hoping to be able to read between the lines for the WHOLE story. leave it to our imaginations. thanks for sharing.

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Adeline Foster 14 September 2013

Fascinating enigma. Read mine – Indebted – Adeline

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