Saturday, March 10, 2012

He's My Dad Comments

Rating: 2.5

Who loves you and loves you e'en if you're bad
Or holds you and comforts you when you're sad?

Who comes to the table and bops on your head
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Jessica Penner
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Sina Farajzadeh 01 August 2012

It was perfect. Great ideas and stanzas. Just the last stanza was not that much good in rhyme. Good work.

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