Friday, March 16, 2012

He's Gone; Who's He? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was sitting outside my house
When suddenly my friend came running towards me
Breathing heavily with eyes full of anxious
Something's going wrong I guess
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Maldrick Lee 10 August 2014

a very well compose poem simple but really captures the imagination.keep it up

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Desert Life 21 June 2012

A very good one with a good flow, though v sad! A 10.

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Dave Walker 16 March 2012

A really sad poem, full of true emotion, a great write.

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