Wednesday, August 12, 2009

He's Everything Comments

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How do you describe the one who holds your heart, can it even be done,
I believe it’s as simple as saying he’s everything I love wrapped up in one.
He’s lying on the grass staring at the stars on a beautiful night,
He’s that first make up kiss you share with the one you love after a fight.
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Brooke Luchich
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Hailey Agnew 02 September 2009

once again you prove to be my favorite poet :) you never disappoint. love it, its perfect. :)

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Ahtivah Lawton 12 August 2009

Once again as alwayz..u have nailed it again..beautiful similies and figurative language..luuv it!

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Brooke Luchich

Brooke Luchich

Darwin, NT
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