He's Coming. Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely penned with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Olorode, if you're going to keep writing like this, you need to study formal poetry in English, its dos and don'ts. A difficult but worthwhile book is Paul Fussell's Poetic Meter and Poetic Form. Rhythmically, your lines above are all over the place. A good poem is not just sentiments chopped into lines but organized in some conscious and pleasing fashion. Good luck with your future attempts. If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com If you like it, perhaps share it whit friends who might be interested? Thank you. JC