Friday, August 8, 2008

He's Away. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sailed through the distance
On rolling-wet waters.
Out of my vision.
In heaving white foam.
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Fay Slimm
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Chuck Petz 15 December 2008

Would that I had your 'Human Touch' Wonderful! !

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James Timothy Jarrett 15 August 2008

I can feel the emotion in this poem, Very nice.10

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Bob Gibson 11 August 2008

Such a beautiful poem, there is such melancholy to see a ship sailing away, a little piece of my heart goes with it

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Ernestine Northover 08 August 2008

Ah, how poignant. Short, but it says it all. The pining for his return. Lovely. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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