I stood all alone
on my shore
as the moon shone.
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Wow.. Amazing and soothing. The imagery here is perfec Suddenly i felt his love like the petals of devataru This was my most favourite. Your write is spiritually uplifting.
The dream on God and Nature is so touchingly delineated. I quote.... I opened my closed eyelids./ God nodded inviting me to his boat./ As if pushed by someone behind me / I went and stepped into his boat. A brilliant poem. Full vote.
A strange but fascinating dream of a devout personality whom God himself take away across the sea of odd experiences in a boat of spirituality. I have heard of many people's experiences how they travelled to the world of death. But this one is special, very dearly taken care by God himself. The emotion is well conveyed. Thank you....10
This is not just a poem, it is a divine encounter. Breathtaking and inspiring piece. ' my heart was filled with the joy of silence', I heard the music of silence....'
This poem is so beautifully written. It draws you in, in the hope that you too could feel what you felt. To be in the presence of God. No wonder his tears fell when he felt your love.
Terrific verse on death in a conversation with God in dream. Message conveyed miraculous magic to my ears. Well done dear poet.
May God hold out his arms and carry peace to you when your days are done. Lovely work! - Jenny
Very gripping and at the same time peaceful, as if one was following you in your journey. An amazing poem.
this poem gives me the freedom to open up to him and accept me
i had a similar dream about my Dad whom died three years old only it was his green car
A death dream expressed in very poetic language, calm, soothing, accepting.... eloquently written.
A beautiful verse, so calm and serene and with a very realistic portrayal of what it must be like to be in God's presence. Very fine imagery.