He Rides The Dog Fence. Comments

i can't understand the first comment. the last line looks like it rhymes to me. an interesting tale, but i preferred talk of camels and rabbits to religious matters. oh well, you can't please everyone! thanks for sharing. i liked the steel bread part. :) i assume damper is bread, not being an australian myself.

Good poem ray but the last line doesn't sond finished it hasn't rhymed, But it's only my thoughts