He Relied On His Sense Of Touch Comments
He relied on his sense of touch
Without having to say much
Randy was a young blind child
Brought up almost in the wild
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Verry touching poem...Your concern is appreciated...Life is struggle as it is here it is much more thann that good poem
my gosh, this is really a great work dear..you put well in words the physical appearance, the behavior and his alertness in a poem..incouragement is present here, intelligence too and maybe the support from his guardians..a very smart poem dear..i like this one..i'll include this in my fav..naizz
That's very well written. Brought a lump in the throat, it did. Cheers. Subroto
concern and helping nature to the differently abled person really well woven in this poem........fantastic write.......
a sensitive and touching subject... apoem well done...thanx for reminding us of our blessings that we take for naught... and also sensitising us to the needs of every day people aroud us superb write...a tenner cheers
A heartwarming story of just what we can overcome if we are given the chance Sandra...this made me smile...your talent with words wins through yet again...Fi 10+++
A true life story that demonstrates the importance of communication in a challenging world. Your plucky little boy had the intelligence and good sense to have a go. Fortunately for him, a 'good samaritan' arrived at just the right moment and turned this story into a 'happily ever after' one. Inspiring words delivered with a keen ear for rhyme. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Dear Sandra, As I said earlier you have got a variable choice of subjects where your love & passion for the under-priviledged flows freely..Your descript and choice of words are appropriate but a bit lengthy.But all our sympathies run for those, 'That even in this tough and cruel world Given a chance they will be able to cope' and they are surviving. Thanks for sharing. -Rajkumar
Well done Sandra. It can take one person to take an interest and make a difference to someone in need. Any one of us could be born blind, and I always treat others as I like to be treated myself. If everybody did this it could heal so many broken hearts. I admire you for your intelligent and comprehensive story. Karin Anderson 10/10
Your pick of subjects is great Sandra. You have dealt with this one very touchingly, yet hearteningly. Well done. If it is a true story(sounds so) please give a small note on that too for readers information
an excellent write sandra...actually people who are not at all impaired are repaired they are very sensitive....
But the world is not short of good Samaritans One came forward like an Aladdin..........World is not short of good people yet................there is still hope in the world.........Good Write........
nice narration on a real time life story, Sandra...by the mid of your write only, you made me open my eyes wide...you are bringing in a lot of goodness in your writes...10
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7/19/2025 12:21:46 PM # 1.0.0
You have such empathy and kindness. I bet there is not much gets by your notice, is there? Wonderful story and made me so happy at the outcome. When people really do care, there are often happy endings, I believe.