Saturday, January 17, 2009

He Moves Me Comments

Rating: 4.4

i met him on a saturday
he said he'd call me on sunday
he kept me waiting on monday
then he called me on wednesday
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Amy Ludidi
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Ashley Ormon 06 February 2009

I loved how you started the poem very light-heartedly and ended it with a greater meaning. Also, interesting to read.9+

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Laurie Hill 18 January 2009

I really like this poem, the humour and the sincerity. It skips along beautifully.

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An so and so.. I enjoyed reading this mi amiga.? ? ? ? ? is it based on reality. if so, he be lucky.

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