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it's wonderful but it will be much better if you arranged the lines in stanzas....but it stills a good piece...fine work i give it 9 unless it be in stanzas...keep writing cuz you're talented..
great job young one..love is so powerful.its a small word but a big emotion..its so passionate desirable....its good
love can be like a wave in the ocean, it will start off small and then gather strength as it gets closer to the shore, and that love will live forever more.
Aww, this makes me wanna cry. Kinda weird to hear a guy say that huh? It's just so beautiful. I know how it feels, and it's so amazing. I felt exactly like that for a girl, well, I still do. But I lost her. I would never wish anything like that on you. I hope you guys have an awesome relationship, and I hope you always have each other.