Friday, October 2, 2009

He Makes Me Love Comments

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Alicia McNamaraCroft
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Aww, this makes me wanna cry. Kinda weird to hear a guy say that huh? It's just so beautiful. I know how it feels, and it's so amazing. I felt exactly like that for a girl, well, I still do. But I lost her. I would never wish anything like that on you. I hope you guys have an awesome relationship, and I hope you always have each other.

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Omar Ibrahim 24 November 2009

it's wonderful but it will be much better if you arranged the lines in stanzas....but it stills a good piece...fine work i give it 9 unless it be in stanzas...keep writing cuz you're talented..

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great job young one..love is so powerful.its a small word but a big emotion..its so passionate desirable....its good

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Louis Rams 03 October 2009

love can be like a wave in the ocean, it will start off small and then gather strength as it gets closer to the shore, and that love will live forever more.

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Alicia McNamaraCroft

Alicia McNamaraCroft

Camden New, Jersey
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