He Made Me Forget To Breathe 6/6/17 Comments

Amazing write especially on a concept rarely explored.

What an amazing piece young lady. Sounds like your 'first' won't be easily forgotten...to say the least. Great poem. And CONGRATS' on being chosen 'POD! Such a well deserved honor. I'm giving this a 10++++ rating.

Opening a new door! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Nothing is ever the same after the first time! Good poem, a ten and congratulations on being poet of the day..

Wow! This expands my understanding of the word FUN. I think it is wonderful that people are capable of a multi-level experience composed not just of pleasure but also of belonging, and a sense of spaciousness in life. It is wonderful how an experience can become a vantage point for looking at life. You share all this in a direct, open-hearted way, so it refreshes my questions. I always wonder how and why we have the capability for such an experience.? ? That too is part of the fun! It takes years to digest the meaning of such an experience, so in a sense it never ends.

First love, first experience, first step towards a settled life. What an enthralling world it could have been! Very well penned personal experience. Thanks for sharing. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X

a poem of lost innocence that will never be forgotten? ......................well written.

Poetically and artistically written... I rate it 10++++ You may visit my BECAUSE I LOVE HER... Thanks...

The narrative lets the reader have the feel of your life changing experience but I don't agree with your statement 'I never imagined it be so fun to lose my innocence.' You did not hurt your innocence. Nobody can snatch away your innocence. It is a part of your being unless you squander it yourself.

hmmmm...nice poem written about the life changing experience. Congratulations, it being poem of the day. Happy reading and writing.