Saturday, April 19, 2014

He Loves Me. Comments

Rating: 4.5

His voice hugs me
All words haunts me
He daily dreaming..
That he dance with me
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Aya Nasr
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Jazib Kamalvi 02 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Aya. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 11 August 2014

idea of the poem is good, structure not well built, some grammatical mistakes despite simple language

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Aya Nasr

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