Tuesday, January 22, 2008

He Left Me Comments

Rating: 4.5

For him I came alone, became his own
He abandoned me when in need
I kept pleading, he did not heed.
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Seema Aarella
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Howard Johnson 22 January 2008

This write is powerful-ly sad, Nearly had a tear, very well crafted to allow the reader to feel the extent of the pain, I hope all is well Semma...

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Brooke Dietz 22 January 2008

wow this is really sad but its a great poem im srry you feel like this and that it happened to you..... you have real talent

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Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

KGF, India
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