He Left Me Waiting Comments

I'm so glad that poems flow out of you Like snow finds its way to the sea If you ever should reach your potential, There'd be no room for poets like me....

Lovely poem. Thanks for the comment. Read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline

This is a masterpiece Lora, I don't know about fishing Kevin..lol.. Excellently written poem friend. Siya_! !

a splendid write. nice to leave when deceived.

Love the humour as usual Lora even though it may be bittersweet? We've all been there though.My late Mother used to say to me, don't worry there's plenty more Fish in the Sea. But when your young your not much good at Fishing!

Great poem Lora, very well put together - love the last stanza.

He left me waiting, staring at the sun, Now I know why love is blind oh, what correlation of the words with inner thoughts! Splendid.