Thursday, January 14, 2021

He Left It Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do an homage
to a part of the self
that leaves some mystery
why this not that?
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M.J. Lemon
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Richard Wlodarski 21 March 2021

Your inspirational poem motivates me to do even more!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

This is interesting fine muse, i liked the despair line and legacy line a lot. We should all try to share, thoughts and gifts. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'mini earthquake experiences'

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M Asim Nehal 19 January 2021

The truth of life, struggle is part and parcel of this life. Real morale booster to stay and fight.5***

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M.J. Lemon 19 January 2021

Thank you so very much, Asim. And yes, without the fight, we are certain, one day, to disappear....

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 January 2021

An excellent write! A mind body tussle- that's life. Thanks Mark.....5 stars

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M.J. Lemon 15 January 2021

Absolutely, Geeta! The mind body challenge. Perhaps they will, one day, become elements that cooperate. Thank you so very much.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 January 2021

this poem was a joy to read Bravo!

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M.J. Lemon 14 January 2021

So good to have you say that. Many thanks, LeeAnn.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 January 2021

Never give up.... this concept resides at the core of my heart! A precious write.

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M.J. Lemon 14 January 2021

Thank you, Dillip. And yes...the key is never to give up!

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Kostas Lagos 14 January 2021

Great poem my friend

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M.J. Lemon 14 January 2021

Many thanks, Kostas. Much appreciated.

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me poet yeps poet 14 January 2021

I C the new PH has also affected your liver as mine equally i have seen a fall how about MMJL YE

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M.J. Lemon 14 January 2021

Thank you Poet. I hope it is not too late for our livers!

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