Tuesday, August 5, 2014

He Is The Same Man Who Lived In A Cave Comments

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The universe is designed to be ruled by power,
Here might is right and mighty is the ruler,
The weak has to pass his life as a slave,
How nice he may be how worthy and brave,
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Khalida Bano Ali 18 January 2019

Liked the thoughts of this poem......

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Khalid Saifullah 14 January 2015

A thoughtful poem.......................10

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Amitava Sur 15 August 2014

A very truthful exposition of facts what is happening on this earth.Once from the ape age through evolution and endeavor man has come a long way on this earth by becoming a civilized creature with their talents and wisdom. But now the man has adapted all the wrong paths to fulfill their very mean personal and vested interest. And if it goes on, one the human will extinct from this earth if they don't correct now. Hence, it is a genuine concern.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 August 2014

Beautiful poem. Very true said in lines....... Man will never improve his behave, He is the same man who lived in a cave. Why the poet is aggrieved his end is near? Just for descendents of my children my dear! This will keep on going, Men are treated like insects...Man kills another man, for its survival, especially when blinded by power.....Poignant write with many touching lines. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Salini Nair 05 August 2014

universe is designed to be ruled by power, ...power rules the world...sometimes positively..but the rest in a bad way...nice sir

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Valsa George 05 August 2014

Man is essentially barborous and like the wild beasts of the jungle, 'might' is right for him even now! Time has not refined him! He has no hesitation in subduing or butchering the weak.... This tendency is on the rise and the future generation might have to bear greater tortures from their fellow men than we people suffer! A grave warning against man's rising atrocities!

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