Saturday, June 14, 2008

He Is In Me. Comments

Rating: 5.0

He smiled at me,
i didn't smile back,
sighing gently,
he asked me 'why'.
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Sandra jacks
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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 November 2008

Your style of expression i liked.........fine! ....10++

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Kyle Shield Laster 28 June 2008

i was scared too... i still kinda am. but faith kicks in. awesome write.

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Gi Galen 27 June 2008

Perfectly, interesting, also involves a tonality …

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