Monday, October 29, 2018

He Is Happy Who Waits Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me be happy today.
I will let nothing hinder me.
Neither the laugh of the gale in the casuarinas
Nor the running riots of sunset crazy colour blend,
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Mohabeer Beeharry
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Chinedu Dike 28 September 2022

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Congrats on your poem's selection as POD

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 26 September 2022

Congratulations on POD. All the best in poetics and creativity

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 September 2022

Such a brilliant poem! Loved it. Top score!

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Mohabeer. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 November 2018

I shiver in the embraces of thousand little joys. I loved this line. Hearty Congratulations dear Poet.

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Dean Edgar 01 November 2018

A well deserved POD.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 November 2018

Joys unknown! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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T Rajan Evol 01 November 2018

Wonderful lines: In the silence of the growing night They scream to be possessed, But I am free, I love, but I do not possess!

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M Asim Nehal 01 November 2018

Congrats at the outset for this lovely inspiring poem...10+++

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Adrian Flett 01 November 2018

The poet enjoys, loves but he does not command. A beautiful description of the time of day as it draws to an end in twilight and reverie.

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Bharati Nayak 01 November 2018

How sweetly they weave the tissue of temptations! They tempt! They fume! But my mind is mine And my heart too, to giveaway or not to! - - - - - -An amazing write- - It held my breath from beginning to the end- - -

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2018

Beautiful poem with stunning expression. Thanks and congratulation for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 November 2018

beautiful poem- Says my fickle mind, let go! But my heart sits still, Firmly domiciled in serene waiting. /// Waiting I'm till the end breath as motionless numb the deaf in dumb for deathless eternal death! /// mystical poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 November 2018

As I sit quiet And look into myself, A strange breath of mystic happiness descends Like a bird it lands on the nest of my being....fascinating poetic expression! I find immense pleasure reading this beautiful poem! Congratulations! (10)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 November 2018

Mohabeer, such a well penned poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen...10+++++++++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 October 2018

Such a beautiful spiritual ink. Got drown in its flow and depth. Thanks for sharing. 'As I sit quiet And look into myself, A strange breath of mystic happiness descends Like a bird it lands on the nest of my being.'..is awesome.

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