He Is Gone. Comments

You have painted a lovely farewellscape. Even nature joins you in your elegiac lament. I love your refrain and your musical rhymes. Always your friend, Sandra

This is vivid and deeply touching poem of lost love, Fay, one that's quite beautifully expressed in every line. I loved your use of repetition in this fine write, one of my own personal favorite techniques. It make a poem quite memorable and very effective in getting it's message across to a reader. You did that exceptionally well in this melancholy poem. Carl.

A brilliant poem Fay! if i may say! saved in my favorite collection I voted it ten, from your golden pen from Bob with greatest affection

Fay, a beautiful but sad poem about the search for a loved one that has now gone. I loved the rhyme and the repeat of that last line through each stanza. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. hugs David

Full of allusions to the beauty of nature which serve to highlight this heartfelt search. The adept use of repetition adds further poignancy to this beautiful poem. S :)

beautiful fay so lovely 10