Wednesday, April 10, 2013

He Is Everywhere Comments

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Wide WIDE as the OCEAN,
High as the HEAVEN'S above,
Deep, deep as the DEEPEST SEA,
Is my sweetheart's LOVE..
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Zeenat Fatima
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Mohammad Muzzammil 16 November 2014

Nice poem. i just say Prettier than every beauty, More fragrant than any rose, That makes one of duty, Giving smile even in pathos, Soaring high and higher above, This is what simply called love.

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Zeenat Fatima 28 June 2015

thanks muzammil.

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Zeenat Fatima 28 June 2015

thanks: -)

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 16 April 2013

very dear indeed. keep up

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Saadat Tahir 14 April 2013

zealous and ardent lines done well speaks the universal truth of the creator and HIS relation to all HIS creation lovely keep going

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Xelam Kan™ 13 April 2013

superb.... in very few lines zeenath beautifully explored love passion.... .indeed love teaches that lover is everywhere...

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Utsav Patel 13 April 2013

Simply adorable... Love it

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