Saturday, July 9, 2011

He Is Coming Back Comments

Rating: 4.8

someday, somewhere, he will come
he will come to renew my life again
to tell me the story of every night
to play with me, to sing with me
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Abdallah Gamal
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Liliana Roman 17 November 2011

10 plus, all the way!

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Jessie Hopkins 16 November 2011

I'm running out of words to praise you with. Here's a traditional one but no less meaningful: Keep it up! :)

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Katelin Offord Harper 25 July 2011

wow this poem is amazing

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Sa'milleah Toatley 25 July 2011

the sky is the limit with this one it makes you think in dept

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Indira Babbellapati 20 July 2011

dreams breathe life into one's desires!

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C.R. Clark 19 July 2011

Dreams can often be influential in ones life, even to encourage hope in a positive outcome in a future event. A very fine and descriptive write my friend. Thanks Richard

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Santosh Sharma 18 July 2011

A nice write with good imagination and thoght, as per your age you have displayed very good maturity, nice one keep writing.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 July 2011

Nice poem written well with vivid imagery. A 10. TFS.

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