Tuesday, February 19, 2019

He Is Alive Only To See You Happy Comments

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Neither he long for you nor will wait
He just loves you and will love you

Even when the tears are ready to appear
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M. Asim Nehal
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Zuzu Mutairi 20 February 2019

Nice ghazal, you have great nick to write ghazals.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 February 2019

Neither he longs.' great poem MAN

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Sarath Kumar 20 February 2019

Wonderful Ghazal He is alive only to see you happy And raises his hands to pray for you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 February 2019

He remains awake often during the nights And talks with stars and moon....I love these two lines! It's a beautiful poem my friend....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 February 2019

Tear is ready to appear and tear is ready to uncover. Still there is happiness in love and he is alive to see you happy. This poem is truly a lovely emotional piece of work. This is an excellent poem very beautifully penned.10

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Deepak S S 19 February 2019

Nice translation of your own poem, Liked it.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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