Friday, September 26, 2014

He Has Gone Comments

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He has gone to shadow in sweet shade,
out of the glare from the ancient sun,
placed his footsteps in footsteps done,
left the ripe rose garden that he laid.
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Diana Rosser
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Chinedu Dike 12 October 2014

Happy memories of a loved one that had just passed-on, subtly written to make the reader feel the loneliness and the happy moment once shared. You captured the feelings very well. Thanks for sharing. Please read and rate my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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